I find this drawing inaccurate: Gabe has 83439 chins collected from not making things. This one only has 20. SHAME!
Overall nice colors. Background is fine, no need to change it.. As for the character:
Her face looks strange because it's too rigid and not soft enough. Same goes for the eye we do see, it's pretty sharp and has those lines underneath it which cause it too look masculine.
A few other issues:
The buttocks are a direct contradiction to the stomach. We cannot see both buttocks, as well as the front of the stomach. Simple fix would be to just remove her right buttock.
Her left foot looks fine, but her right foot looks like it got small too fast. I understand you wanted perspective, but it's not quite right, in both it's size as well as it's position is impossible since the stomach suggests she is angled and not directly sideways, meaning we shouldn't even be able to see that foot at all.
All in all, good efforts. Just need more refinement, and less contradictions.
fantastic review dude, we don't see enough of this these days.
you make some great points that are pretty spot on,
thank you :D
As always, top notch stuff from you. The second panel really sells it for me. Your comics are better than the ones in the paper.
Thanks TrashMan1. Maybe the internet is the new newspaper!
As always, your comics are among the funniest on Newgrounds.
That is going to be some serious guano...
Pretty slick. I lke the sharpness in this. The colors are also well thought out.
This is really well done. I like coloring, and the heavy style influence it has.
My only complaint, is that the gun looks a little odd, and lacks depth like the rest of the picture. It's only a minor issue though, and more likely just my personal feelings towards it.
That's a good one. So funny. So true.
I have to admit, your M-A stuff usually disturbs me. But honestly, this one is quite funny.
I like how you don't just copy paste panels and actually drew each one manually for every last part.
Madcat's expressions are priceless.
I always knew that Fred was on something. How else would you explain his being able to see the great Gazoo. It was all in his head.
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